OnyxPhyre's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faye Faye #3]

Great drawings, but could you please find more material than just Faye? Seriously, you only have 2 pics that aren't Faye Valentine...

Crystalspike responds:

check out my more recent stuff...there's alot less faye now.

[Fate Valentine Mix 3]

The boobs don't look natural

Especially around the arms. They don't curve, but abruptly end. And the cleavage down the middle doesn't look right either.

If your goal was to put her arms forward, then I suggest making an indication where her arms are pressing into her breasts, and then closing up the gap in the cleavage.

Or you could ignore me and take figure drawing XD
Your choice.

Otherwise, I don't see any problems. Kepp up the good work.

Crystalspike responds:

thank you for this

[MUNCH]

heheheheheheh

When I saw the thumbnail for this I was going to comment on it's toenail.
Now I'm not....it might eat me if I did.

lol.

Nicol3 responds:

Hehe. I laffed.

[Kinetic]

......

Two words:
Holy. Shit.

This is excellent!

KrevZabijak responds:

That was seven words. (I joke a lot, don't mind me.)

<3 Thanks for your review. This piece is my favourite work; even above my orange statue one.