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Great drawings, but could you please find more material than just Faye? Seriously, you only have 2 pics that aren't Faye Valentine...

Crystalspike responds:

check out my more recent stuff...there's alot less faye now.

The boobs don't look natural

Especially around the arms. They don't curve, but abruptly end. And the cleavage down the middle doesn't look right either.

If your goal was to put her arms forward, then I suggest making an indication where her arms are pressing into her breasts, and then closing up the gap in the cleavage.

Or you could ignore me and take figure drawing XD
Your choice.

Otherwise, I don't see any problems. Kepp up the good work.

Crystalspike responds:

thank you for this

I agree w/ ClockMushroom

Don't be afraid of making a chick's hips too skinny! It won't make her look too fat or anything, in fact it'll do just the opposite!

Hourglass figure, man: Wide shoulders+Skinny waist+Wide(r?) hips=SMEXY!

Y'know what this reminds me of?

Racheal off of BlazBlue, when she's sitting on her ginormous cat-thing....

Love the pic. Definitely showing this one to the gf....who's gonna say the same thing XD.

Hey! My andraoid's male, too!

Course, my android doesn't need to strip naked to recharge, lol XD
Poor Gauradas 00.

This is a very nice piece of work, and I happen to agree too many pics/androids like this are "compromised" females (I'm looking at you, Chobits). This world needs more male droids, besides the ones from DBZ.

I'd also show this to my gf, but then she'd drool and ignore me for the rest of the week, lol.

Keep it up!

hmmmmmmmm

I'm not sure what to category this into....
Undead or Cyborg.

heheheh....nice detail, btw.

heheheheheheh

When I saw the thumbnail for this I was going to comment on it's toenail.
Now I'm not....it might eat me if I did.

lol.

Nicol3 responds:

Hehe. I laffed.

"He's dead, Jim"

Looks like it hurts. Very nice detail.

Pretty inmpresive

The hairdo reminds me of Albel from Star Ocean 3 (SO: Till the End of Time in the US).

......

Two words:
Holy. Shit.

This is excellent!

KrevZabijak responds:

That was seven words. (I joke a lot, don't mind me.)

<3 Thanks for your review. This piece is my favourite work; even above my orange statue one.

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