Good story, but...
Everything seems to take too long in terms of the action. I.e., it took far too long for Shadow's "solar flare" to blind Sonic....
Good story, but...
Everything seems to take too long in terms of the action. I.e., it took far too long for Shadow's "solar flare" to blind Sonic....
Has anyone else noticed...
That "He's a pirate" from Pirates of the Caribbean is playing while he's massacring all of the sticks?
I thought that was rather amusing.
Wut DSteer said
I wanna see more of this! This is a great idea!
Cute
I could really see the character development in this story. I'm really sad to see it go.
PLEASE!! MAKE MORE!!
See? He was the filthy one.
freakin' funny!
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